Saw the end coming from a mile away, and the voices were annoying. But it was not too bad.. just work on your animation and your voice work, and soon you'll get
10s, but for now, i give you a 5.
ps. sry if my english sucks(it's not my first language)
yuppers. I sound like a yobbo. It was the first time I ever did voice acting and I sucked. I know I wouldn't have done a good job of it but just thought that it would add abit of zest if I added voices.
and your Enlish is very good
the short is so great, love the start.. when the busdriver starts talkin about setting goals and all that, its so lulwut, i love it.. perfect 10!
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